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She sang a song


She sang her song of the evening*,
But then he gave a sigh.

Her song, split into two.
One- the flight of a Siberian bird,
Unknown and endless.

The other-
Falls on smelly moist ground,
Dead, before it could fly.


Comments

That sounds mystical. Sorry, but I have to ask - what does it mean :)
Proma said…
fiCUs, I will send you an email sometime explaining the meaning of this poem to me.
Ray said…
Hi ,I just love reading your blog. Some brilliant writing there. I too am mystified by this latest entry. Can you shed any light on this?
Ramya said…
Profound post, proms. Love it as it plays with my imagination.
Proma said…
Thank you Ray and Ramya for your wonderful comments. It keeps me going.

@Ray : As Ramya says, this poem can be interpreted in many ways, and by giving away what I meant in the poem, may be taking away the meaning for many other readers.
Vivek Sharma said…
Wow Proma... Love this one!
Proma said…
I'm glad you liked it Vivek :)
Laras Mama said…
Love that poem! So nice to see someone using free expression instead of tightly structured and perfectly rhymed!
GOOD POEM ...
I HAVE WITNESSED&HEARD
SUCH SONGS...QUITE OFTEN
DURING SILLY FIGHTS WITH
SOMEONE DEAR TO ME....
BUT YOU HAVE GIVEN IT LIFE...
HATS OFF TO YOU..../bvarakil.blogspot.com/
GOOD POEM ...
I HAVE WITNESSED&HEARD
SUCH SONGS...QUITE OFTEN
DURING SILLY FIGHTS WITH
SOMEONE DEAR TO ME....
BUT YOU HAVE GIVEN IT LIFE...
HATS OFF TO YOU..../bvarakil.blogspot.com/

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